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Deicide by ~mute-8:iconmute-8:

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Ok, basically this is the first part if the first episode of a 3 p thing I'm doing, and I'm just putting it up here to see what people think and get some feedback about it.

By the way, I know thats not how you spell Decide. This is because the animation is called Deicide, as in the killing of a god. The title will become more relevant as the story progresses and with the addition of the rest of the animation(s).

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=chalkley3 Dec 16, 2007, 5:53:56 PM
Okay, you undoubtably think it's fantastic, so I'l skip straight to the bastadry. Just a few things I noticed:

1. His head doesn't move. Is he doing a Linda Blair or what?
2. Preloader. You can find preloader templates anywhere, and there's no excuse not to have one.
3. Looping. With a dramatic movie like this, you can't have the movie randomly start over again. Add a new layer called actionscript and on the frame you want it to stop put on a new frame on the actionscript layer: stop();
. Also, consider finding out how to make a replay button. There are tons of tutorials around.

4. You probably know this but: Audio. Voice acting, Sound effects, Music. All create that essential sense of atmosphere. Why did you buy that mic if you weren't gonna use it?

Otherwise, good movie.

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~mute-8 Dec 17, 2007, 2:49:53 AM
In answer to all those questions in order...
The head thing is kinda wierd.
I have only the vaguest idea of what a preloader is, is it that thing that counts up at the beginning of the film?
I'll get right on the actionscript thing
Audio's gonna be in the final copy
Cya

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=chalkley3 Dec 17, 2007, 6:30:33 PM
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yay

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~Pabx Dec 22, 2007, 5:56:03 PM
lol thats pretty awesome... you cant shoot through bullet proof glass, smash, shoot. im lookin forward to the sound and of course the rest of the story

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~mute-8 Dec 22, 2007, 6:48:11 PM
cheers

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~Ckn-bonbon Jun 17, 2008, 4:09:27 AM
Haha.
It's actually cute,
Though you probably didn't want to hear that.
Its Good

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~mute-8 Jun 17, 2008, 11:24:58 PM
its only the first part of the first ani....im still trying to make it
thx :D

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~mute-8 Jan 27, 2009, 7:25:20 PM
it aint loading yo

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